You're a mental mess if you're going to pick on those things in an awesome resume that's solely using the idea of visual expression to better articulate itself. Find another thread to pick on pal...
His resume is otherwise very good. I was providing feedback he can choose to use or not from a design prospective. I would be very happy to have someone who has expertise i do not provide feedback on my work.
Yes you're comments are "helpful" but, you should be shedding that advice on a project that is looking for it. My comment is indirectly helpful by attempting to have people avoid leave comments like yours on great work that has no place for irrelevant points.
Yes its a visual resume, but unless he's specifically in the design field, the time you took to point all those things out could have been put to better use elsewhere.
And this response can apply to all the others that left attack-esque "advice" ...
