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I'm not sure if it's appropriate to give unsolicited suggestions on the writing, but I believe the author could improve the conciseness. It reads a bit verbose in places where certain information is repeated multiple times, such as the mention of configurations were retrieved from GitHub and Google Drive sites.


Writing technical articles is hard. They're usually research note dumps or technical jargon mixed in with some english words.




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